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Title: Strip
Fandom: SG1
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Rating: PG-13
Note: I'm archiving my commentfic written for [ profile] mornincamper and the pictures she posted here, because [ profile] starting_gate ordered asked me to post it at large.
Summary: Please, baby..Strip for me


“No, Daniel,” Jack’s voice held an ever-so-slight edge.

“Jack,” Daniel whined pleadingly.

“No.” Jack repeated firmly.

“Please, baby,” Daniel asked, eyelashes fluttering in that ridiculous fashion that he swore wasn’t flirtatious. "Strip for me?"

“Okay, fine,” Jack griped, unbuttoning his standard issue shirt with military precision.

“Slow down, Jack. Tease me a little,” Daniel asked quietly. And Jack tried, really he did, but he felt ridiculous. As long as he was naked at the end, why did it matter how his clothes came off? Something of his attitude must have translated into his body movements.

“Oh, yeah take it all off, baby,” Daniel leered with gross exaggeration.

“Look, Daniel, if you don’t want,” Jack began.

“What I want is for you to be into it,” Daniel huffed. “Don’t humor me, Jack. I hate that. If you don’t want to do this we don’t have to; we’ll just stick to your vanilla way of doing things.”

“Excuse me?” Jack said with faux patience, eyes widening in alarming fashion. “Did you just accuse me of being a prude?”

“If the standard issue military boot fits,” Daniel growled back.

“Oh, that’s it!” Jack quickly re-buttoned his shirt before sitting down to lace up his standard issue military boots.

“Jack?” Daniel asked, alarm threatening to break through his enforced calm.

“You wait right here,” Jack ordered, "If we’re gonna do this thing we’re doing it right. Now, where can I get a fireman’s outfit and a stripper pole?”


The complete list of my Stargate fiction can be found here.

Date: 2009-02-09 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Eee hee hee hee hee!!! He'd better make sure he gets the pants with the velcro down the sides. :D

Date: 2009-02-09 03:03 am (UTC)
ext_3563: A little reading elf, captioned 'fool for books' (Default)
From: [identity profile]
*extremely amused* Now there's a lovely mental image!

Date: 2009-02-09 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I think the visual aids excited her.

Ya think?

I love their voices here. Just fabulous and clever. I'm delighted you decided to take me up on my polite request. :p

Date: 2009-02-09 08:22 am (UTC)
ext_4014: (Default)
From: [identity profile]
Um...Can I haz yr icons?

Date: 2009-02-09 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

icon love

Date: 2009-02-09 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
A fireman's outfit and a stripper pole - well, I think Daniel will call Jack more often a prude, if this is the result. *lol*
Thanks for posting the gorgeous fireman with the story. *g*

Date: 2009-02-09 07:46 am (UTC)
ext_3999: (Default)
From: [identity profile]
Bwaaaaaaaaa!!...I love it!!....

And I want front row seats when the suit and pole are delivered!....*snortle*

Nice fic!!

Deeds xx

Date: 2009-02-09 08:23 am (UTC)
ext_4014: (Default)
From: [identity profile]
Stripper pole, fireman's outfit...

I also want the hat, the hook and ladder and the glowy strips so you can see him in the dark!

*gets mornincamper and crackers for teh show*

Date: 2009-02-09 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
can we sit in the rig?

Date: 2009-02-09 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Last line slayed me, hee!


Date: 2009-02-09 03:03 pm (UTC)
bluemeridian: Chloe from Smallville, with coffee and a sideways look. (Default)
From: [personal profile] bluemeridian
*checks wallet for bills* Okay, ready any time, Jack!

Date: 2009-02-09 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Lol - literally - and now the guys at the hostel know think I'm nuts, but it was totally worth it! You never fail to delight with your awesomeness! and that last line - Lol, Lol, Lol!

Pic Combo to Blame

Date: 2009-02-09 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Image (

Re: Pic Combo to Blame

Date: 2009-02-10 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ooo, nice combo. :D

Date: 2009-02-10 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
LOL! Go, Jack! Never do a thing halfway.


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