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Paian ([personal profile] paian) wrote in [personal profile] lilyleia78 2008-12-04 03:44 pm (UTC)

“Well it certainly wasn’t the way I envisioned getting into your pants,” Jack responded. He said it so matter-of-factly that it took awhile for the words to catch up to Sam’s, and apparently Daniel’s, already preoccupied mind

the expression on her father’s face, that look that was an eyeroll without the actual eyeroll, was painfully easy to place. She’d seen it employed many times in her youth, usually in regards to Mark’s attitude toward his latest crush. It meant ‘get a room’ and ‘could he be more obvious?’

I can so vividly hear and see those moments -- love how you evoked them. And so much love for Jacob! His/his actor's reaction to the glasses-push is one of my favorite things about that scene -- really fun to see what you did with that here. And the progression of the Jack/Daniel relationship that's visible in the glimpses that Carter gets, evolving almost in parallel to her own developing understanding/realization. Neat effect. :-)

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