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Paian ([personal profile] paian) wrote in [personal profile] lilyleia78 2009-04-26 01:42 pm (UTC)

Love this! Love the merging and melding of then-Jack and now-Jack. Also love that the therapist is helpful. And the shock-and-then-joy on Jack's face at the end, so brief but encapsulates so much. The serenity of the trees is lovely, and drenches the fic in a peacefulness that Daniel's straining-to-remember and Jack's concern struggle against and then beautifully relax into. The tension merges into peacefulness in parallel with then-Jack merging into now-Jack. Mmmmm.

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