etrangerici: quizical jack (Default)
etrangerici ([personal profile] etrangerici) wrote in [personal profile] lilyleia78 2009-07-13 12:34 am (UTC)

Got it, thanks! Re the beta, I mostly worry about the pronoun clarity, since that's a special pet-peeve of mine.

If that makes sense, I'm fairly happy with the rest.

Thanks again for the look-see.

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