paian: Daniel looking around a corner (daniel by paxm)
Paian ([personal profile] paian) wrote in [personal profile] lilyleia78 2010-01-05 04:08 pm (UTC)

Oh, yay, you wrote the fic for [personal profile] discodiva76! So pleased to see this.

Love how it's structured, and how owchy and happy it is at the same time. It pinged off 'Point of View' for me in some cool ways, too, especially when Jack says "I'm not him." I especially liked "You hate alternate versions of yourself" -- so true. And Just before he drifted off he felt his glasses being slipped off his face and what he could have sworn were the press of familiar lips to his own -- sweeeet.

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