Thank you. I was hoping it read as a true missing scene and not an AU.
Charlie was the sticking point for me. I think maybe Jack could have/would have helped the team, except how do you help someone who tells you that in the 'right' world your son is dead? That'd be too much to ask of me.
I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the pointy; I need to post to comms now that Deeds has approved the story.
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Date: 2010-01-06 01:37 am (UTC)Charlie was the sticking point for me. I think maybe Jack could have/would have helped the team, except how do you help someone who tells you that in the 'right' world your son is dead? That'd be too much to ask of me.
I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the pointy; I need to post to comms now that Deeds has approved the story.